This is how the story opens ...
Chapter
One
I opened my
eyes and had to blink several times to clear my blurred vision. Where the
hell am I? Daylight seeped through the woven curtains into the room, but it
didn’t do much to help me identify my surroundings. I turned my head to get a
better view, and a thundering pain, like someone had bowled a spare inside my
skull, warned me not to move again. The shriek that echoed in the room came
from my own mouth after I raised my right arm and rubbed my eye. It felt as if
I had jammed a hot poker into it, and I jerked it away.
A bandage?
This time I used a feather light touch to examine the other side of my face. It was completely covered. My hands trembled at the possibilities. What had happened?
Maybe things hadn’t gone the way
I’d planned with Reese last night. She wanted to join me on this weekend trip,
but I had to beg off. Now I couldn’t even remember what I’d told her. What I
did recall, and probably would for weeks to come, was the send-off she’d given
me. Surely, telling her she couldn’t accompany me on the trip hadn’t angered
her enough to go for my face. The past twenty-four hours was a muddled mess.
Wasn’t I supposed to be in…Colorado? Right, a meeting in
Telluride. My brilliant mind finally deduced that this definitely wasn’t
Hollywood producer Craig Weinstein’s vacation house.
But where? And why?
Without moving the pounding boulder attached to my neck, I
stretched my gaze as far as possible to the right and saw a chalkboard on the
otherwise bare beige wall with the date and three names written on it. Some
beeping machines stood beside the bed.
Hospital. I’m in a hospital. The antiseptic smell should’ve
been a dead giveaway.
Everything went into a spin when I
raised the boulder a few inches off the pillow and saw a contraption suspending
my left leg in mid-air, but I had no feeling in it. Ice spread through my
stomach. “God! Oh, God! No!” This couldn’t be happening to me. White-hot bolts
of pain shot directly to my brain. I grabbed my head in what felt like slow
motion and squeezed my hands together to keep my brains from falling out in
spite of the tubes that tugged at my right arm. Where the hell was the call
button? My hands tore at the sheets in a frantic effort to find it. Finally, my
fingers found the heavy rubber-coated wire close to my left side. I ran them
down the cord until I found the controls and held the button down.
“Where is everybody? What am I
doing here?”
“We’re on the way, Mr. Breland,” A
woman’s voice spoke from somewhere above my head.
“Please calm down.”
Within seconds two nurses rushed
in.
“Where am I?” My words sounded
slurred.
“Try not to move, Mr. Breland. You
don’t want to pull out the IV,” the blonde nurse said in a calm tone. She moved
to my side and placed her hands on my shoulders. For some reason, her touch
calmed me, and I slumped back against the pillow.
“It’s okay. Just lay back and let
us check you.” Her eyes judiciously scanned the monitors next to the bed while
she continued speaking in a reassuring voice. “You’re in Telluride Medical
Center. You had a serious car accident. Both of your legs were broken and your
hip was dislocated. The doctor performed surgery last night, and your left leg
is stabilized. You are very lucky to be alive, Mr. Breland.”
All I could do after hearing that rundown was groan. What
the hell could be lucky about being that damaged? “What about…my face?” Even under the influence of whatever they
had given me, I hated the way my voice trembled.

11 comments:
I want more!!! I definitly wanted to know what happen with everybody.
Wow, this is gonna be good. I knew you were going to give Vaughn his own story. His character was too ripe not to give him one. Can't wait!
Cool! Looking forward to reading the rest!!
Thanks for sharing! Keep writing, Chicki!
Wow! You just keep cranking 'em out, Chicki. You must be the Queen of Deep Emotion. Excellent scene. Thanks for the sneak peek.
*hugs*
~JD
Wow! You just keep cranking 'em out, Chicki. You must be the Queen of Deep Emotion. Excellent scene. Thanks for the sneak peek.
*hugs*
~JD
Thanks, for dropping in, June! I've been reading everything I can get my hands on about deep POV. I'm so glad you think it's working. :)
You have so pulled me in!!
Girl, this is fab! Very intriguing. looking forward to reading more.
Hugs x
This seems to be an exciting read!! Thanks for sharing your gift with us!!
I love this new one Chicki!
Arlena
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