Disclaimer: All of these excerpts are unedited. The whole manuscript won't go to my editor until the story is complete.
In today's sneek peak from Ain't Too Proud to Beg, we return to Telluride, Colorado so I can introduce you to the female protagonist, Trenyce Clark and her daughter, Zahra.
Chapter
Two
Trenyce
Clark – Physical Therapist. I stared down at the nametag I’d removed from my
shirt after I finished with my last patient session for the day and returned
the free weights to their stand in the corner. My job at the hospital paid a
decent salary, and I loved working with my patients, but the hours were
horrendous. The responsibilities of being a single mom left me little quality
time with my daughter, Zahra. Although I’d never wanted to be a stay-at-home
mom, I knew Zahra and I didn’t spend enough time together. She hadn’t asked to
come into this world three years ago. And she certainly hadn’t asked to start
her life without the involvement and care of a father, so I had to fill that
void the best I could. I was quite capable of raising my daughter alone.
Although Zahra’s birth hadn’t been
planned, she was the light of my life. So smart and so beautiful, sometimes I
couldn’t believe she was mine. She had gotten the best of both her father and
me - a curly mass of light brown hair, not her father’s straight, blonde hair,
and her fawn-colored complexion was closer to mine.
Once I put all of the equipment
back in place and signed out, I drove to 221 South Oak, one of the nicer
watering holes in town where Penny and I met for our standing once a week girl
time. Spending an hour or two with her was my only social outlet these days. As
promised, she was waiting for me on one of the cushy sofas in front of the bar.
I eased down beside her.
“Hey, bestie.” Her lightly
freckled face spread into an easy smile. “How was work?”
“Like it is every day.” We moved
over to the bar, and the bartender came right over when I wiggled my fingers at
him. “My regular, Tim. Thanks.” I turned back to Penny with a nonchalant wave.
“Nothing exciting. The ever-present skiing mishaps, a couple of seniors with
knee replacements. That kind of thing.”
She smiled. “Well, at least you’re
not working the slopes or waiting tables, Nycee. The way things are these days,
I’m just glad to have a job.”
“Me too. I’m not being ungrateful.”
Tim sat the strawberry daiquiri on a napkin in front of me. “But I’ve told you
how it is. Being hospital staff, you’re subject to its rules and regulations.
If the other therapist doesn’t show up, I have to cover. That doesn’t thrill
Zahra or the aftercare people at her school,” I said between sips. “It seems
like I’m always paying overtime fees, and you’ve even had to pick her up when I
couldn’t get there by seven.”
“You know I don’t mind. She’s my
goddaughter. I’d do anything for my little Ladybug.”
“And I appreciate it. I just need
a job where I can make my own hours.”
“One of these days, you’ll be able
to freelance.”
“Oh, right. When Prince Charming
comes galloping up to rescue me on a pristine white snowmobile with his ski
pole drawn. Yada, yada yada.”
Penny swirled the straw around in
her drink. “It could happen, you know. Anything is possible.”
I laughed and shook my head.
“That’s why I love you. You’re the eternal optimist.”
“So, are we going to spin class on
Friday?”
“If they have someone to monitor
the kids’ room. Zahra likes hanging out there.”
We finished our drinks, hugged and
said goodbye then headed back outside in the cold. The recent storm had dumped
a fresh layer of snow, and the plowed piles lining the streets were no longer
gray. I exited the parking lot and turned my four-wheel drive Grand Cherokee
toward the daycare center. The Jeep handled the snow beautifully, the reason
I’d bought it rather than something smaller and cheaper. On my way to the
daycare center, I recalled the days Penny and I spent as roommates at the
University of Phoenix. At first I hadn’t been thrilled with the idea of sharing
my dorm room with a white girl and had even asked my parents to get my room
assignment changed. What in the world would we have in common? They encouraged
me to stick it out for at least the first semester and promised to intervene at
that time if I still wasn’t happy.
Penny Murphy turned out to be the
perfect roommate. My rather sheltered, middle-class, southern suburban upbringing
was in direct opposition to her big city background. She wasn’t afraid to do
anything or go anywhere, and she enthusiastically dragged me along with her to
campus events and townie parties that I would never have attended by myself. By
the end of the first semester, we were inseparable. And we had remained best
friends ever since.
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4 comments:
Great writing Chicki! I love how you incorporate pics for your readers to see, enabling us to view the picture you want to paint of your characters. When I read novels, I depict what I believe the character looks like in my head and always wonder how they appear in the author's head. That's why I like to use unique descriptions to paint that picture. However, I love your technique.
Thanks for stopping in, Michelle! Finding physical role models for my characters is the first thing I do. I am a very visual person, and I have to know what they look like before I start writing. :)
Love this! Such a neat look into the life of Trenyce Clark. I can picture what may be next and look forward to it. Thank you for another fun look into your book.
I'm looking forward to reading the whole story!
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